SPOILLER: Error reporting

[Gabriel Kross]

This is for posting found grammatical or detail errors, this is not for discussion please use other spoiller threads that fit the topic you wish to speak on if you want to discuss.

 

In Aviendha's point of view their is a line that appears to be off.

 

 

"To give the Aiel an exemption from his price-if, indeed, that was what was what he intended_was an act of honor."

 

 

I think the second "was what" was a grammatical mistake.

[Terez]

Ahh, that was the typo I fixed and couldn't remember where it was. Thanks.

[yoniy0]

Well, this isn't on the same level, but Isam probably wouldn't have sworn by the "Light" (DF like Bors might've, but Isam grew up in the Blight).

 

Also, Luckers posted in the other thread that when Bair said "despite what Kymer said", she was actually thinking of something Amys said beforehand.

[Peter Ahlstrom]

I asked Maria, and let's just say that despite everyone's best efforts, there are some small errors in the ebook that had already been fixed in the proofs. So while the latest fixes probably got in, there are some earlier fixes that are not there.

[RobinAllen]

when the wise ones are in the sweat tent they get dressed before leaving it. i always thought they dressed and undressed outside of it.

[yoniy0]

Hey Peter. This thread is just meant to help teamJ and you locate whatever's left. Absolutely no judgement intended.

[Peter Ahlstrom]

That's the way I read it as well, yoniy0, so no worries. Errors are for fixing, not for getting offended over.

[Olver_is_a_Forsaken]

Hi Peter,

 

A theoryland poster (eht slat meit) found another:

 

I have more questions for discussion. How many heads does Aludra have exactly, and who do they belong to?

 

"Aludra cocked a head at him."

[Terez]

Hey Peter. This thread is just meant to help teamJ and you locate whatever's left. Absolutely no judgement intended.

 

I would hope not, seeing as how the title of the thread is misspelled, and the OP not only has an egregious run-on sentence but also fails the there/their/they're test.

[yoniy0]

Yes, yes, lough away at us poor DM mods. We'll just sit here all alone in the dark and feel sorry for ourselves.

[Gabriel Kross]

Hey Peter. This thread is just meant to help teamJ and you locate whatever's left. Absolutely no judgement intended.

 

I would hope not, seeing as how the title of the thread is misspelled, and the OP not only has an egregious run-on sentence but also fails the there/their/they're test.

 

I'm a lazy typer, but the general gist of the thread was meant to help.

[Luckers]

Yes, yes, lough away at us poor DM mods. We'll just sit here all alone in the dark and feel sorry for ourselves.

 

That is awesome, more so if it's intentional. :D

[SamJ]

Here's one. I don't think Leilwin would comment on Nynaeve's lack of braid as unusual - when they were in Tarabon, Nyn was in disguise and was wearing multiple braids in the local style.

 

p.s. first post on dragonmount, so just to be clear: this is not meant as criticism, but trying to be helpful.

[Guest aramina]

Bair referring to Aviendha's "grandmother" and Avi to Kymer's "uncle" Han.

 

I don't recall ever seeing anything about what Aiel call their uncles, so who knows, maybe the latter is right, but thought I'd point it out just in case.

[Clouded]

Bair referring to Aviendha's "grandmother" and Avi to Kymer's "uncle" Han.

 

I don't recall ever seeing anything about what Aiel call their uncles, so who knows, maybe the latter is right, but thought I'd point it out just in case.

 

"Grandmother" should be "greatmother" or "second greatmother" depending on if she is the maternal or paternal grandmother.

 

Uncle would be sister-father if the relation is by the mother. it would probably be brother-father if it's by the father, but that info is not explicitly given.

 

Source: Glossary of TFOH.

[MasterAblar]

Yes, yes, lough away at us poor DM mods. We'll just sit here all alone in the dark and feel sorry for ourselves.

 

That is awesome, more so if it's intentional. :D

 

Considering how far away the "o" is from the "a" on a keyboard, I should hope so.

[Suttree]

Bair referring to Aviendha's "grandmother" and Avi to Kymer's "uncle" Han.

 

I don't recall ever seeing anything about what Aiel call their uncles, so who knows, maybe the latter is right, but thought I'd point it out just in case.

 

"Grandmother" should be "greatmother" or "second greatmother" depending on if she is the maternal or paternal grandmother.

 

Uncle would be sister-father if the relation is by the mother. it would probably be brother-father if it's by the father, but that info is not explicitly given.

 

Source: Glossary of TFOH.

 

Again these little details individually don't matter much but after so many add up it becomes a pretty big issue...

[Vardar]

when the wise ones are in the sweat tent they get dressed before leaving it. i always thought they dressed and undressed outside of it.

 

They do. They leave their clothes outside the tents normally.

[Terez]

Yes, yes, lough away at us poor DM mods. We'll just sit here all alone in the dark and feel sorry for ourselves.

 

That is awesome, more so if it's intentional. :D

 

Considering how far away the "o" is from the "a" on a keyboard, I should hope so.

 

He might have one of these:

 

[MasterAblar]

Yes, yes, lough away at us poor DM mods. We'll just sit here all alone in the dark and feel sorry for ourselves.

 

That is awesome, more so if it's intentional. :D

 

Considering how far away the "o" is from the "a" on a keyboard, I should hope so.

 

He might have one of these:

 

 

. What kind of keyboard is that?

[Neophyte]

The one the Forsaken use ...

 

No, but seriously, it's the Dvorak Simplified Keyboard. And it is evil.

[MasterAblar]

The one the Forsaken use ...

 

No, but seriously, it's the Dvorak Simplified Keyboard. And it is evil.

 

Geez. I'm annoyed just having to go between French and American keyboard...

[yoniy0]

O_o

 

I see that our secret is out. We choose staff around here based on their learning disabilities

[Peter Ahlstrom]

I typed dvorak for years. Once I started working using various random computers it got inconvenient.

[Guest Hammar O'Justice]

{ "The men are starving, Jarid," Davies repeated. }

 

It is in fact Karam who said "Our men are starving." Davies made no prior observation about hunger.