Will Rand Live?
You most need to work on:
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1. You most need to work on:
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Originality (I’ve read this before ... and it was better that time)0
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Characterisation (who are these people and why should I care?)2
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Pacing (too slow, I was bored)0
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Pacing (too fast, I was confused)0
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Infodumps (why would I ever want to know half the stuff you told me?)0
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Prose (this clunks)1
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Nothing (this was good)0
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Everything (this fails on every level and I want ten minutes of my life back)0
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