Alright, I need to pick your brains...

[U4ea]

I need as many people reading this and helping me edit it as humanly possible. Mainly because I suck at editing my own stuff and (Yes, I admit it) I don't proofread jack! LOL

 

I put up three parts (I'm still putting the finishing touches on part 3, but most of it is up) and I'd really appreciate the help.

 

This is my submission for the DM Anthology that I only have a few weeks to finish! YIKES! This is through part 3... of 10! CRAP! HELP! PLEASE? I'll bribe with brownies if I have to...

 

http://home.comcast.net/~TiffFranklin/ScratchandBAG.htm

[U4ea]

*sighs* posted up through most of part iv...

 

I guess I'm not getting any help here? *pouts*

[LadyMoraine Sedai]

Im here now...ill read it tomorow as i can...post a link love?

[U4ea]

*points to the first post* The link is there. LOL Thanks!

[LadyMoraine Sedai]

duh

 

 

i see it...ill read up some of it tomorow

if not all of it

 

*hugs*

[Zardi]

Gah, sorry. I started reading this but kept getting interrupted. I do want to finish it, though. What kind of proofreading are you looking for? Just grammar, spelling, etc.?

[U4ea]

anything I can get! If something doesn't make sense or you have to read a sentence twice to figure out what I meant, hit me with it! I'd rather get picked to pieces by my friends than made fun of by perfect strangers. LOL

[LadyMoraine Sedai]

Run on sentence...part one

 

 

She tucked the flashlight under her arm and pulled the fresh bulb out of her pocket, dropping the flashlight to the floor as she reached up with both hands to screw the new bulb in place.

 

 

Bailey laughed again and picked the flashlight up; flicking the switch off and dropping it back into the desk. **Is that suppose to be a semi colon or comma?**

 

Thats all I got out of the first part..Ill read the next part tomorow..:)

[LadyMoraine Sedai]

Part 11 was just fine..no errors that I could find...story reminds me of another Ive read not so long ago...Something about dragons ;)