DM submission DONE!

[U4ea]

The only problem.... is that I'm 255 words over my 20K word limit. *sighs*

 

So, HELP!?!

 

http://home.comcast.net/~TiffFranklin/paper_gardens.htm

 

I need editing and cutting help! I need to get this out before I go to Chicago, too. I'll love you forever if you help... I will, I will...

[UrsulaLV]

PART II PP3 italics-remove, underline-add

 

She grabbed her robe and threw it over her shoulders, padding across her apartment and grabbing a can of his food from the pantry. She hummed as she dumped the contents into his bowl and Scratch seemed to be singing along with her as she laid it on his mat next to his water bowl. He waited patiently for her to move, then attacked breakfast with his usual gusto, earning him her usual grin as she filled the coffee pot with water and pushed the start button.started the coffee.

 

:)

Just pull out some of the extraneous description. I know, its your baby, but its too big to birth, so put it on a diet.

[U4ea]

*laughs* Alright, I put it on a diet and got it right under the line. LOL I'm sending it in now, ya'll cross your fingers... :D