Jump to content

DRAGONMOUNT

A WHEEL OF TIME COMMUNITY

[s]Goal: 100,000 New Goal: 200,000[/s] New Goal: 250.000


Toy and Minion

Recommended Posts

  • Replies 237.9k
  • Created
  • Last Reply

Top Posters In This Topic

  • Smiley73

    58682

  • Crimson_Ayla

    55914

  • Nyanna al'Meara

    22574

  • mmeeshal

    18999

 


 

My favorite has always been the Gary Provost lesson on varying sentence length to create rhythm and flow

This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word sentences are fine. But several together become monotonous. Listen to what is happening. The writing is getting boring. The sound of it drones. It’s like a stuck record. The ear demands some variety. Now listen. I vary the sentence length, and I create music. Music. The writing sings. It has a pleasant rhythm, a lilt, a harmony. I use short sentences. And I use sentences of medium length. And sometimes, when I am certain the reader is rested, I will engage him with a sentence of considerable length, a sentence that burns with energy and builds with all the impetus of a crescendo, the roll of the drums, the crash of the cymbals–sounds that say listen to this, it is important.

 
Link to comment
Share on other sites

Banana. Banana banana banana. Banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana. Banana banana. Banana banana banana banana banana. Banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana.

 

that last line got me.

 

right in the feels

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Join the conversation

You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.
Note: Your post will require moderator approval before it will be visible.

Guest
Unfortunately, your content contains terms that we do not allow. Please edit your content to remove the highlighted words below.
Reply to this topic...

×   Pasted as rich text.   Paste as plain text instead

  Only 75 emoji are allowed.

×   Your link has been automatically embedded.   Display as a link instead

×   Your previous content has been restored.   Clear editor

×   You cannot paste images directly. Upload or insert images from URL.


×
×
  • Create New...