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A WHEEL OF TIME COMMUNITY

angelsfan

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    • Pg 247 - "...or maybe because she had been forced act like his lover."
    • Pg 247 - "...rougher than the ones which have buffeted me..." - 'which' should be changed to 'that'
    • Pg 253 - "...lined in carefully placed river stones." - 'in' should probably be 'with'
    • Pg 256 - "...would be we be able to work..."
    • Pg 269 - "Aes Sedai had Healed him as best he could" - 'he' should be 'they'
    • Pg 300 - "She couldn't very well walk about without a stitch."
    • Pg 343 - "...wishing the fire were a little less warm" - should be 'was'
    • Pg 355 - "Brigitte reluctantly passed by the inviting scents of food and instead pushing her way out into the cold summer storm."
    • Pg 359 - "...life of my love..." - love of my life???
    • Pg 392 - wolfbrother is usually capitalized
    • Pg 496 - "the cavalry had already been sent to another of his group of defenders" (groups)
    • Pg 497 - "the smoke here was much less thick" - awkward phrasing
    • Pg 500 - "onto the killing field outside and the beyond"
    • Pg 515 - "working for straight through the nights"
    • Pg 609 - "How many was the Shadow going to take from him..." - should be 'were'
    • Pg 625 - "They galloped their horses to the of camp"
    • Pg 759 - "though there was some heavy cavalry" - should be 'were'
    • Pg 777 - "The land beyond this gateway more rugged than southern Andor"
    • Pg 795 - "The Eelfinn eyes shone..."

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