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Luckers

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  1. I've been pretty open with my problems with tGS and TofM, if you want to look around the boards. Mostly its the timeline and continuity issues, the compromising of secondary characters in favour of primrary characters (or primrary characters in favour of better liked primrary characters), the at times clunky prose and dialogue, and the tendency to tell instead of showing.

     

    *shrug*

  2. You misunderstand what Brandon was saying. He didn't say 20% was going to get cut, he said that there was 20% extra which requires more effort.

     

    Even wen your talking about editing cuts... Plot is not getting cut in the edits, it gets tightened. Things like 'he pulled out the chair, and sat down' become 'he sat down'. You'd be surprised by how many words are cut in this manner--the story is better for it.

  3. Kivs, have you read the interview he did recently with Brandon Sanderson? He speaks about having the book "finished" in the 2000 draft, and the process of editing, and the resultant time he was intending to take--it sounded like he was intending much the same degree of editing for the next book as he did for this one.

     

    Which, frankly, I'm fine with. Name of the Wind was very well written, and Wise Man's Fear was even better.

     

    I'd love to see more stuff in this world. Especially the Adem. Profound understatement.

  4. @Baily hehe. I was feeling a bit... quirky... when I wrote Elaida.

     

    @Scoobin, yeah they might not work with Ipad. It's a google doc of a pdf.

     

    @Cloglord, Yeah, Verin was just about to take him to Caemlyn, he wasn't actually there. Though Rand sees him in Ta'veren technicolour in Caemlyn, so I doubt she kidnapped him or anything. Still, your right, I may have made an assumption there.

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