Looks ok to me - consider it CCed.

 

I would point out 2 things, though:

 

1) Note for you - aren't we supposed to put the people's handles in, so it's recorded who the character belongs to?

 

2) Just a tip to the author: The bio flips back and forth between present and past tense. RPs (bios included) are written in past tense except for the dialogue part, which is written in present tense.

Hey that's the Bio I submitted!

Sorry just looked at the e-mail and I didn't actually include my handle so yeah my fault, haha.

Also now that I read it the tense does jump around a bit, I'll try pay more attention to that in the future.

I have to say as well that was really quick, I only wrote this last night hahaha!

Hey guys,

Thought I would pop in an introduce myself, because I will hopefully be getting involved in some rp here soon.

After lurking around for a while I finally decided to write up a Bio for a warder an sent it in so yeah.

Hows it goin everyone?