Re- approved Black Tower Bio for Ful Haert - CC pleeeeaaaase.

[Wayward_fool]

Handle: minisamus

Character: 1

 

Character Name: Ful Haert

Nationality: Jehannah, Ghealdan

Age: 15

Height: 5'0

Weight: 96

Eye color: Dark brown

Hair color: Brown

Voice: Soft

 

Description: ambitious young man,pumped full of dreams and ideals about chivalrous past

 

History:

When he was little Ful Haert would wake up early as to catch the rising of the sun. He gloried in the shade of the Mountains of Mist, daydreaming of being the Dragon Reborn when so many feared that name. It was a child's fantasy. Ful knew of course the prophecies proclaiming the Lord Dragon made the wishing impossible. He was the second son of a wealthy merchant who specialised in the gem trade.

 

Ful's brother, Gavin, became a fervent Child of the Light, and was promoted rather quickly through the ranks. Mother wanted Ful to take after Gavin… Ful was easing toward the choice when puberty hit. He, at thirteen, took up the sword and joined the rabble of the Dragonsworn, hoping for a glimpse of the one he desired with all his soul to serve.

 

Through word of the mouth, Ful heard a few months later, a certain place in Caemlyn, nicknamed 'the Farm', where Asha'man recruited, tested, and taught men how to channel. Without fear or regret, the young man travelled alone, with nothing but half a purse of gold marks, the sword, and a great deal of hopes.

 

His childhood fantasy had long vanished from the conscious, but the lad was still attracted to the idea of channelling.

 

Ful entered the Farm wanting to be the dangerous weapon, wishing to be known as a Destroyer. A weapon for the Light. A weapon for the Dragon.

 

[Wayward_fool]

Erm... hi. Is anyone doing any CCing? Yoohooo...

[devon]

I'm hesitant to CC this, since the bio makes it seem that the Dragon has been around for well over two years before Ful even joins the Black Tower, which makes for some tricky rping later on when he becomes a full Asha'man. Maybe if he was dragon sworn for a few months before joining the Black Tower, it would be better, because two years is an awfully long time when dealing with the rp timeline.

[Taymist]

I agree with Devon. The bio is also kinda sketchy. At what point in the story does the RPing of the character begin? At the moment it sounds like a few years have passed since joining the BT and all of the training's just been skipped over. Bit of clarification would help.  :)

[Wayward_fool]

Will do. I'll get it checked out and get back to you.