Autumn Mist and White Fang

[WhiteWolf]

Rhya and Owen have been rping at some length since they first met. It has got to the stage where Rhya has thrown herself at Owen. Thankfully Owen was desperate and did not spurn her*ggls*

 

http://forums.dragonmount.com/index.php/topic,42833.0.html

 

In all seriousness though, i have come up with this as a way to explain their relationship.

 

I think it represents Rhya and Owen quite well, but i am open to any constructive input on how i could improve this.

 

I am not sure if this is the final draft, although Rhya and Owen seem to be happy with this version.

 

What do you guys think?

If we twist and turn away.

If we tear ourselevews in two again.

If we could throw this lifeless

Lifeline to the wind.,

I f we could sacrifice ourselves,

To set our spirits free.

We’d lead our hearts away,

 

If we could, you know we would.

If we could, we would let it go.

This desparation.

Dislocation.

Separation.

Condemnation.

Revelation.

Temptation.

Isolation.

Desolation.

 

Is it getting better?

Or do we feel the same?

Will it make it easier on us now?

One love

One life

When one is all we need

 

Well it's late tonight

To drag our past out into the light

We're one, but we're not the same

We get to

Carry each other

Carry each other

 

Have we come here for forgiveness?

Have we come to raise the dead?

Or will you slay the ghosts in my head?

Love is a temple Love a higher law

You ask me to enter

But then you make me crawl

 

One love

One blood

One life

We’re each other

But we're not the same

We get to

Carry each other

Carry each other

 

We are One

 

PS we had a little help from Bono ;D

[Taymist]

*does as she's told*  :P  ;D

 

I love it, I think it's really good and sums them up well. Be interesting to hear what others think though.  :)

[Winterwinds]

<Wipes tear from eye and claps> That was cool :D I dont see anything that needs fixing, cept it would go well with music  ;)

[TaiDashan]

Fits what has happened between the two very nicely *nods* very well written  ;D *thumbsup*

[Taymist]

*returns the favour* What? I was playing  ;) any awfulness must be forgiven due to lack of sleep  :P

 

He's been so alone

that sorrow's taken hold

Can't leave him there so cold

That's not his fate

 

Her touch could be so kind

A breath to give him life

She's waited all this time

It's not too late

 

Won't leave him there alone

'Cause he barely sees the way

Won't leave him on his own

He was...

 

Falling in the dark, slipping through the cracks

Falling to the depths, have to bring him back.

Dreaming of the way it used to be, she heard his call

Always

 

She'll be his source of strength

She'll trade most everything

She loves for this one thing

Stranded in the offering

Don't leave her there like this

Hear her shout from the abyss

And now she's wished for him, one desire

 

Don't leave her alone

'Cause she barely sees the path

Don't leave her on her own

She is...

 

Falling in the dark, slipping through the cracks

Falling through the depths, can she make it back?

Dreaming of the way it could be, she'll hear his call

Forever

 

 

 

[Jehaine]

If Rhya and Owen (the characters) are happy with it, who am i to complain?

 

Congratz, you two ;)