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Shredder: The First Hunt Opening Paragraph


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Preface:  The opening paragraph has already been posted to my MC's blog, so I'm offering this shredder up as a public piece.

 

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Dorian called me into his office, which was better than being sent to his office. It was nearing time for the Ad Aetatem. I was also due my final testing as Magnus, so it wasn’t quite unexpected. As soon as I sat down in my chair, Dorian was called away.  To kill time, I fiddled with my cell phone. My best friend Sage had bought it for me. He set it up so that I could do anything the laptop he gave me could only sometimes better. Both gifts I was paying off with favors since I didn't make a dime. 

 

 

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Reading through this, give me a tick to break it apart for you. ?

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