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Jak o’ Shadow - Take III

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1 minute ago, Zander? said:

Come on now Cass dont Abuse Me

Were just living in Cemetery,

That Daniel Johns sure is dreamy

Im in a Freakshow with Jak O the Shadows.

 

Dancin' in a Neon Ballroom 

A Pure Massacre coming soon

Cause Dearest Helpless, Z drops the boom

I Learn To Hate with Jak O the Shadows 

 

 

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Go zander, go zander!!! Woop woop.

You guys really have to teach me how you make those verses, I just can't do it without a melody. I found the one but apparently my lines got too long with that sigh.. ?

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?  try focusing more on rhythm than melody for a sec? I think of it more like a drunken chant - melody goes out the window and it's more that groups can yell it drunk and end each line with a rhyming cheer.

 

You want it to sound like a heartbeat,

with emphasis on every second part/beat/syllable.

 

"Da-DA, Da-DA, Da-DA, Da-DA"

 

The easiest to start is probably like that, four heartbeats (8 syllables) per line, giving something like:

 

Our HEARTS, they GO Ba-BOOM, Ba-BOOM!

 

Repeat that pattern for 3 lines, in a rhyme, with every last part sounding the same. Then finish the 4th  line with something that fits  "Da-DA with Jak o' the Shadows!"

 

 

....

 

 

Our HEARTS, they GO, Ba-BOOM, Ba-BOOM

 

And YOU/can HEAR/aCROSS/the-ROOM

 

The FUN/we HAVE/when WE/fight DOOM

 

To-DANCE with Jak o' the Shadows!

 

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And you say you can't, but Lava, some of your original verses WERE right for the longer patterns, just missing the last rhyme ?

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47 minutes ago, Cass said:

And you say you can't, but Lava, some of your original verses WERE right for the longer patterns, just missing the last rhyme ?

Yeah in my defense I kinda walked solely due to caffeine back then haha..

1 hour ago, Cass said:

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You want it to sound like a heartbeat,

with emphasis on every second part/beat/syllable.

 

"Da-DA, Da-DA, Da-DA, Da-DA"

That actually makes so much more sence! I'll try that out one day thanks!

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Lav you learn the Jots sway 

Zanzan and Cass'll show you the way

Then practice, practice everyday 

I Lav will beat Jak o the Shadows 

 

 

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Me thinks its time to go old school 

My JoTs like ice, just so damn cool

Making all comers look like fools

I place my throne on Jak o the Shadows 

 

Come one come all, its time to fall

Like Lebron James my JoTs just ball

Calling my name, my curtain call

I drop the mic on Jak o the Shadows 

Edited by Zander?

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Where o where can my frand Cass be

My enfpmusictwinhydrafrand-y!!!!

Come JoTs, the Cavs vs Infantry 

I await with Jak o the Shadows 

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I'm Violent Femmes in this fight

Im high as kite 'n i just might

Stop and take out Cavs tonight

I transcend Jak o the Shadows

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Tic toc of the clock is painful 

Your horse is slow go try a bull

Screw the archers, i stab to kill

I drop bodies with Jak o the Shadows 

 

 

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Our Lord Matrim founded the Band

With a cocky grin, spear in hand 

Infantry reppin, frand o Rand

I name drop with Jak o the Shadows 

 

In Mats honor i drop epic JoTs 

Jots 101 Im very well taught

And DAMN i drop em like its hot

I own 3 Rivers  Worldwide Inc. with Jak o the Shadows 

 

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TM of Zander Bobby Inc a subsidiary of Taco Corp a subsidiary of Prestige Worldwide a affiliate of 3 Rivers Worldwide Inc.

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I top Lan Mandragorian 

Imma Jots Mandalorian 

Be notifyin' yo next o kin 

I testify with Jak o the Shadows 

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Youre telling yourself just maybe

Bout dem chances, none against me

Just Hasta la Vista baby 

I Terminate with Jak o the Shadows 

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Its time for your discipline

Challenge me, a cardinal sin

Smoking foes, be like Machin Shin

I rollup Padan Fains remains with Jak o the Shadows 

 

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Challenge a whole reg, none come forth

So many wins, im King of the North

Valar Morghulis, you look....hoarse 

I rewrite and reflim season 8 with Jak o the Shadows

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14 hours ago, Zander? said:

Where o where can my frand Cass be

My enfpmusictwinhydrafrand-y!!!!

Come JoTs, the Cavs vs Infantry 

I await with Jak o the Shadows 

 

I'm stuck with a weekend of chores and

I'm finding them terrible bores, Zand!

This verse though, it caused smiles so grand, frand ❤️

Let's roll ol Jak o' the Shadows! \m/

 

14 hours ago, Zander? said:

I'm Violent Femmes in this fight

Im high as kite 'n i just might

Stop and take out Cavs tonight

I transcend Jak o the Shadows

 

Nah, the truth is that we're all on one team

ALL us Infants and Archers and Cavs, we dream

of fighting and making the Shadowed Souls scream

Let's burn ol Jak o' the Shadows!

 

We'll rip ol Jak from limb to limb,

gallop, stab, fletch though things be grim

Dovie'andie se tovaya sagain, Matrim!

Let's laugh at Jak o,' the Shadows!

 

 

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Then one for all and all for one

When you see the Band, youd best run

You see the Red Hand and your done.

I roll the dice with Jak o the Shadows 

 

We dance, we drink we love to fight

Battle all day, chase girls at night

Raise our glass to our fallen might 

I salute the dead with Jak o the Shadows 

 

Whether its man or shadowspawn

The fight against evil rages on

Night is darkest before the dawn

I watch the sunrise with Jak o the Shadows 

 

So mount your horse or draw your bow.

Unsheath your sword, its time to go

Upon the Winds of Time we flow

I fight again with Jak o the Shadows 

 

 

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And as we march we'll sing this song

The verses shall go on and on

We'll ne'er give up, with voices strong

We chant at Jak o' the Shadows!

 

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Now Cairos says it's time for Lav

To learn to be a proper sav

Can't she just be a glitter cav?

To sparkle with jak o'the shadows

 

The infants want to dig latrines 

Why can't they do it in the greens?

Oh! Lava found some jelly beans!!! 

To munch with jak o'the shadows

 

Where ever will Lav choose to go?

May she be able to shoot a bow?

Watch out! The arrows fly high and low

To shoot with jak o'the shadows

 

Now, Cairos wipe away that frown

Lava can do it in a ball-gown

She'll cuddle those trolocs into the ground 

To smother with jak o'the shadows 

 

 

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11 hours ago, Zander? said:

Great job Lav!!!!!!!!!!!

Thankie, thankie! *bows* its all thanks to you and Cass *huggies both of yah*

 

Lavlav was struggling all day long

But couldn't write that wretched song 

She tried and tried but it went wrong

To strangle that jak o'the shadows ?

 

Cass's heartbeats made it all clear

Now lavlav sing without a fear

With cass and zanzan cuddlebear

To rock with jak o'the shadows?

 

 

 

Edited by Lavandula

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Now LavLav's got the hang of it!

We'll sing and dance to words she's writ!

And drink again to cheer her grit!

She's smashed the Jak o' the Shadows!

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Lav is now writing "Lavish" JoTs 

With skill, with swag with lotsa thought

Becoming the next JoTs Tupac 

She drops rhymes with Jak o the Shadows 

 

Edited by Zander?

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